Celestial Force Vol 1 color spread

Well here it is...My color spread for the manga I'm entering for the world wide SJ Manga Competition. It doesn't have the logo or my signature yet but it's colored and stuffs...I'm kinda nervous...don't hold back I need as much criticism as possible!
No I don't own sai. This was done with Traditional+Manga Studio and the touchpad on my laptop...I lost the pen to my Pen Tablet so I had to do this the hard way...Hence why coloring it took a month. (I spent the first month writing and editing the script) but the rest will be in black and white and traditional...I can do an entire page edits and everything in one day. (That's cause I've done traditional all my life, it's what I'm used to.) There where days I worked on this till my arm and hands were sore. But it's what you do for the sake of art!